A Cover Letter Template for Investment Banking
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- 附加在bottom of this postis an investment banking cover letter template that is sometimes used forWSOcover letter reviewclients.WSOhas decided to make it free in order to help those of you that can't afford a more tailored service.
- This particular cover letter template uses bullets to keep the points succinct and the format easy to read. You'll also notice that the header matches theWSOinvestment banking resumetemplate format.
IBCover Letter Advice from theWSOCommunity
Here's what you need to know about the cover letter.
The cover letter holds almost no weight, other than to put you at risk for being dinged. Make it very simple, very bland, and just say all the usual things. If you have mistakes in it or make outrageous claims, your cover letter will be circulated and laughed at.
Why Do Cover Letters Matter?
Like @CompBanker" said, you won't get the interview with your cover letter. Your goal for your cover letter isn't to single-handedly land you an interview with your eloquence and grandiose; it's to check the box and make sure it's proper enough that it doesn't get you dinged.
Less Is More for CLs
Our users shared great input on why 'less is more'.
What you really want people to be looking at is the resume. The longer your cover letter is the larger the chance that you'll have a typo or say something stupid. Just tell them what job you're applying for, who you've been in touch with at the firm, and maybe a few sentences about your qualifications and lock up the deal with a solid resume.
K.I.S.S: Keep It Simple Stupid. Mention who you've talked to at the firm, your interest in the job, your qualifications, and briefly (very briefly) explain any gaps in your resume. (Avoid excuses, more on this later). Two or three paragraphs is all you need for that. Any more than that, and you're giving them potential reasons to ding you.
Here's some great advice from @blackice".
The best thing you can do is name drop people you have talked to. That way I know you have done your homework, and I can ask the person you talked to how your chat was. I think cover letters are better when they are focused on your past work experience as opposed to general and arbitrary sentiments about how you are a "hard worker and team player with a strict attention to detail".
If you've talked to someone at the firm and they'd remember you, DO namedrop them in your cover letter.
Common Cover Letter Mistakes
Here are mistakes I have seen:
Excuses:
"I realize my professional experience is more in technology and lacks in finance. I believe that was just bad luck due to graduating from myMBAprogram at the height of the "Great Recession". However, I am 100% committed and motivated to prove myself in a finance position."
Bad luck? No, it's the shitty and difficult-to-read resume, cover letter, and 'research reports' that are the issue. I'm almost certain you would be a terrible employee just by the quality of the work you sent me in a cold email. You graduated from college 10 years ago, by the way. I remember at least a few of those as being pretty good years. If you were halfway decent, you could have squeaked in the industry in more than a few of those years.
Please do not pin all of your circumstance on luck, especially in a cover letter. Even if the reader is a big believer in luck, you're telling him you're unlucky. Who wants to hire someone who's unlucky? It seems the bad luck streak started in utero, if you ask me.
Revealing Your Ignorance:
Even worse than just plain ignorance, the below quote was from an attached research report that this guy wrote. Since he thought it was worth including, I assume the report was something he was proud of, but it was cringe-worthy.
"I am placing a STRONG BUY recommendation on [company]. ("ticker") and believe that [the company], at the current price of $10.00, trades at a 123% discount to my estimated fair market value of $22.30" (Both made up numbers to scale to the actual numbers listed in the 'report').
123% discount? C'mon man. Don't you think about the stuff you write before you blast it out to hundreds of potential employers? Anyone that reads it will certainly never hire you.
The report should have never been attached. It made a weak applicant look even worse. He's clearly never done anything but 'book learn' on these subjects. It's painfully obvious by reading the report. He uses four valuation methodologies on the stock with the sole intention of showing that he knows more than one valuation method.
If you're thinking of including a research report on a company when you're cold emailing people, it's a high risk strategy. Your research probably sucks unless you've been doing it professionally. If there is any doubt at all about including a 'research report', do not do it.
(Side note: The research report had a lot of opinions and not a lot of facts, and it lacked connections between really basic facts about the current state of the business to the 'projections'.)
The Hail Mary Cover Letter
If you don't think you have a chance to get the job, you can toss a Hail Mary with your cover letter. Here's a cover letter an audacious undergrad used in an effort to stand out and grab the attention of its reader. A big swing that's either a hit or miss. We don't recommend using this cover letter unless you lack the slightest chance of getting the interview in the first place.
Dear BLOCKED,我的名字是(被阻塞),我是一个本科finance student at (BLOCKED). I met you the summer before last at Smith & Wollensky's in New York when I was touring the east coast with my uncle, (BLOCKED). I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to talk with me that night.
I am writing to inquire about a possiblesummer internshipin your office. I am aware it is highly unusual for undergraduates from average universities like (BLOCKED) to intern at (BLOCKED), but nevertheless, I was hoping you might make an exception. I am extremely interested in investment banking and would love nothing more than to learn under your tutelage. I have no qualms about fetching coffee, shining shoes, or picking up laundry, and will work for next to nothing. In all honesty, I just want to be around professionals in the industry and gain as much knowledge as I can.
I won't waste your time inflating my credentials, throwing around exaggerated job titles, or feeding you a line of crap (sic) about how my past experiences and skill set align perfectly for an investment banking internship. The truth is I have no unbelievably special skills or genius eccentricities, but I do have a near perfect GPA and will work hard for you. I've interned forMerrillLynch in the Wealth Management Division and taken an investment banking class at (BLOCKED), for whatever that is worth.
I am currently awaiting admission results for (BLOCKED) Masters of Science in Accountancy program, which I would begin this fall if admitted. I am also planning on attending law school after my master's program, which we spoke about in New York. I apologize for the blunt nature of my letter, but I hope you seriously consider taking me under your wing this summer. I have attached my resume for your review. Feel free to call me at (BLOCKED) or email at (BLOCKED). Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
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- Using phrasing like: "After mysummer analyststint, I learned the entire deal execution process..."; "I am extremely proficient in354manbetx and354manbetx ...". You get the idea. Be confident, but don't over-emphasize anything out of the scope of your ability to speak to it.
- Not enough emphasis on teamwork. This is important. People should know that you are able to work with others. This is easy to incorporate, just give a brief two sentence overview of what your team structure was and why it made sense.
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Comments (16)
It's really hard to create a template for cover letters because everyone is so different. Just make sure the formatting at the top (where you have your name, address etc..) is the same on all your documents. For example, if you open you resume, cover letter, transcript and references in 4 different pdfs, and alt+tab between the four files, the top section should be identical.
除此之外,不应该有任何模板for cover letters, I don't think.
Date
Dear ....,
3-4 paragraphs about why that firm, why you, what have you done. etc...
Thanks you...
Sincerely,
Name
Make sure the first paragraph includes name drops, and location/group if you're applying to a specific group.
Any more cover letter advice? I haven't received any callbacks with my old cover letter, so I'm trying to put together a new and improved one. Here's what I've came up with thus far://www.yjhypon.com/forums/please-review-my-resume-3#comment…
If you are not getting interviews it likely isn't the layout of your cover letter or resume that is is the problem, it is the content. Why not post your cover letter / resume here and let people take a look at it?
I finally got a job... Thanks to everyone who chimed in.
Congrats man
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how did you land the job? just applying online?
what kind of position is it?
Good work Eazy - E
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Interested and can't find it. Does anybody has the template?
谢谢。
Found it? can't find it either
Nah I had to use the Mergers & Inquisitions template. Quite good still.
Bump.
econcan't find the template mate. An update would be much appreciated!
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