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I'm a freshman at a Canadian target school, trying to get an internship for the summer. As per a lot of the advice I see here, I'm gonna be going for search funds, smallPE/VC商店和PWMS。这是我将使用的冷电子邮件模板：
你好Name，，，，
我希望你能收到这封电子邮件。我的名字叫xxxx，我是xxxx的第一年xxxx学生。我通过source并正在伸出援手了解您的职业Industry。
Recently I have been attending XXXX at XXXX, which so far has taught me some intriguing finance concepts and valuation techniques. I've developed an interest in analyzing companies, which prompted me to start forming my own investment ideas and exploring various careers in capital markets.
I am very eager to learn about your experiences at公司，以及您对Industryindustry. If you have any availability, would you be willing to call in the coming X weeks?
最好的，
XXXX
有什么我可以改变的东西以使情况变得更好吗？
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Anso561，纯板球，这就是我进来的地方。这些有用吗？
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If those topics were completely useless, don't blame me, blame my programmers...
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